Saturday, September 16, 2006

A2) Learning Lessons Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take a walk through Pol Pots fields
Sculptured white with bone
Come live beneath a Lebanon sky
And make believe it’s home
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Bill Smith
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Ivor Hogg 06 April 2008

Im not holding my breath that the race of men will ever learn to live in peace.Just possibly it is the only thing that stops the human rave fromoverbreeding so extensively we all die of starvation. I played at soldiers many years ago in Malay ans as usual wew were in the wrong

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Jessel Jane Tevar 16 September 2006

Youre absolutely right there in your poem.I really like the message it bears... At first...i didnt read it thorougly, its as though im looking for words that would make me appreciate the poem.And then the last stanza caught me... it caught my soul that i just have to read the whole poem over from the start.And my heart never failed me.Your poem's worth reading.

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Prasanna Kumari 16 September 2006

i felt choking while reading your poem.but i am still alive.this is a good message for the world.

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Steve Hagget 16 September 2006

And so often we dont even try to learn from our mistakes. Super poem this Bill that I really enjoyed, Steve

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