A17 The Disappointed Crowd Comments

There she found a place, With some green grass, And under the wet mud Some water she traced. what she did with vision and cause. others could not grasp it and failed....it is good poem....10

The Lady has little bernadette in a rance-like state but the little girl is in total ecstasy and joyfully obeys the directions of the Lady! Fine story-telling Poet RR. in your own unique, simple, short style! Children would simply love to read this 'all in one go'! WELL DONE Dr John Celes

'Selfless' is the word that comes to mind here. Bernadette desires to obey The Lady at any cost. Her dedication is awesome to behold. Great write, Rajaram. As always, Sandra