When Universe showed its face,
No plants grew, not even a trace;
Seeds did not sprout for lack of rain;
Barren was the land without grain.
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A wonderful word-painting of the most beautiful place God made for Adam and Eve, our first parents! And their Original sin of disobedience which threw them onto the earth to suffer, labor and moan! Nice job, Simon, Dr John Celes
A beautiful word painting of Eden that place that was as close to Heaven as our earth has ever come.I love the last stanza that speaks of men and women becoming one soul in two bodies when they marry. Wonderful work, Simon. Kindest regards, Sandra
Great uncle if men and women had understood all this bliss in their creation and how made for each other they are..there would be good family lives in earth