Tuesday, April 10, 2007

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you lose a fight
then two, then three
tongues throw words like tiny stones
you drag home tattered bits of hope
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Ben Partenay
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Delilah Miller 10 April 2007

Ben, ths is beautiful. It's true I've forgotten what it's like to lose a fight, but this certainly puts it in perspective. Your poetry alwasy does, though. I'm a big fan Xs and Os

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