Thursday, December 21, 2006

A Yuletide Tale Of A Rusty Nail Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was Christmas eve in the valley
The miners came up from the pit,
They came out of the cage picked up their wage
And went home for a shower and a shave.
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archie langford
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Fay Slimm 29 November 2008

I can even hear your lovely Welsh accent as I'm reading through this one Arcgie - - what a hoot you are and it is beautifully put together too. a 10 yet again from Fay.

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Fahim Sayed 20 May 2008

amazing storyline...very nicely portrayed..........Cheers

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Ernestine Northover 31 December 2007

What can I say. This is a knockout poem, hilarious to read. Very well constructed and a great storyline. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX Best wishes for the New Year.

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Dee Daffodil 24 November 2007

LOL! You are so clever Arcie! ! ! What a tale of passion! ! I love this! Hugs, Dee

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Marilyn Lott 30 May 2007

I loved it, Archie. You have great style and wit! ! Keep 'em coming! Marilyn

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Scarlett Treat 28 December 2006

This made me think of the tale of Dan McGrew, you know, the one in Alaska! Funny! !

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