Sunday, November 8, 2009

A Young Sunny Day Comments

Rating: 4.3

once she called me
the wishes vanished away
in the midday heat of
the young sunny day
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Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)
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The Lost.. 09 November 2009

where no one is faithful where is the greatest war 10 ya mohamed: P.do u know what i mean? ? if you dont, nvm: P nice poem.

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Romeo Della Valle 08 November 2009

Wow, Mohammed, what a great piece, well penned, full of feelings flawing through your magic pen...Like I did when writing my poem titled 'A QUEEN WAS BORN'.you got my vote 10+++ you well deserved it, keep it up!

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