Saturday, January 14, 2012

A Young Knights Story Comments

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Emerging slowly to a resonant truth
The mind, body and soul of an errant youth
Yawned, stretched and reached out to life
Seeking knowledge, fortune - and maybe a wife
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Shaun William Hayes
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Sharron Stephenson 15 January 2012

the talent you have for using words is so unique and clever. the ending could be the way we think or not how we wish it was

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Linda Ori 15 January 2012

Excellent tale. Loved the light hearted undercurrent. Not a great ending, true, but then most jousts don't end well. Great write!

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Shaun William Hayes

Shaun William Hayes

The edge of the New Forest, UK
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