A Young Farewell Comments
Those endless eyes I daily see
Those pretty eyes that set me free,
From bondage that, from darkness's blight,
That opened mine and gave me sight
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simple movements to a simple observation to a really great poem..
Your ideas were nicely expreesed.. I love the concept and flow of the poem.. You're rhyming again! .. It seems that you are greatly inspired by someone. Who might that be? ... *laugh* Just kidding.. Keep it up! ! .. c:
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7/28/2025 8:52:24 PM # 1.0.0
you really know what to write, and how to write it.. good work! !