Saturday, December 29, 2007

A Young Childs Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wrote this for a prose and poetry presentation I preformed. All the misspellings are not done in error it was meant to paint a picture of just how a five year old would speak.

Star light, Star bright,
First star I see tonight.
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Tabitha Castillo
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Ayesha Sartawi 29 December 2007

i think it is a very touching poem i honestly enjoyed reading it i dont understand what alot of poems that are written mean but this one i could really relate to becuase it feels familliar thank you its one of the best ive read in a long long time

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Tabitha Castillo

Tabitha Castillo

Long Beach, California
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