Friday, March 2, 2012

A Young Age Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

I start my day with a cry,
thinking about her all the time.
I have all regards for her,
hope one day she will be mine.
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Shubham Koul
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James Mclain 18 August 2015

Welcome friend, as you grow older you will find that love when not blind, really is.. iip

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Sankaran Ayya 14 April 2012

Very good poem nice interesting though sad -KAVIN CHARALAN

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Neela Nath Das 13 April 2012

It's a cry of unrequited love.Nice one!

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nice lines, once I started reading, i couldn't think of anything else till it ended.i love the rhymes. one thing, i don't actually understand love poems in the best way, but i can tell this one is good.

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nice lines, once i started reading, i couldn't think of anything else, the poem in itself is intriguing, and i love the rhymes. good poem.

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Bimal Koul 10 April 2012

good..all the best....keep writing more

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Shubham Koul

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