Thursday, June 16, 2016

A Yellow Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Suddenly a yellow shadow of a silent river
kissed the fragrance of my dreams
and wholeheartedly mumbled around my
crazy eyes of revelations!
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Unnikrishnan E S 23 March 2017

Hi Nilima, Wonderful imagery: open your eyes and be cheer up a garden of love-bees waiting for your close up' And the disappointment when you discern that it is just a dream.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 June 2016

The blue breathing of the shadow disappeared gently into the bubbles of lullaby sung by the fairy river, I never ever heard before...................wrought beautifully by wonderful imagery..yet ingenious speckles of blue upholds shadow, as breeze reels through breath for crave to curve; ; +10, thanks for sharing.

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Nilima Deb 24 June 2016

thank you so much dear poet for your great commenting and neat observations.Best Wishes.

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Sranisha Francis 18 June 2016

Very beautiful poem...........

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Nilima Deb 21 June 2016

thank you so much for your read!

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Kishore Kumar Das 18 June 2016

Nilima, when you were busy in your dreams, the mesmeric sunrise in the river was showering you with yellow cascades of radiations..........the effect.......a beautiful poem penned by you....

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Nilima Deb 21 June 2016

thank you dear poet.Yup, where there is life there is dream...love to be with them.

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