Thursday, November 29, 2007

A Yellow Moon Hung Low Will Only Tell The Tale Comments

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There is a cloudy yellow moon
Hanging low in the sky tonight
It tells the tale of a young lady
With hopes that soar too high
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Bob Blackwell 11 June 2009

Kamryn, I like this poem very much, it shows you are happy with what you believe. 'If you delight in your own talents, you will attain perfection' (The Geeta) One of your countryman wrote - 'If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hear a different drummer. Let him step to the music he hears, however measured or far away.' (H.D. Thoreau) Like you wrote ' do not be a sheep in a crowd'. You are a very wise lady, and write tales we all should read. Well done keep writing. Bob Blackwell

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