A Year Without Your Light (To Mom) Comments

wow that was beautiful....

I love how you kept the light. You showed the pain but entered the healing and going forward. You put alot into this poem with only a few words. Good writing. Not only a good poem, but a good message too. Well done. Deborah Cromer

a deeply moving poem...i really empathize wit it..great write...check out ' when my mom cries ' by me...think its on the same lines....

A-MA-ZING! ! ! WOWZA! ! ! (My teacher says that a lot)