Saturday, June 16, 2012

A Year Without Rain Comments

Rating: 4.3

A year without you is like a year without rain,
since you came into my life..
everything became bright,
I used to live in the dark..
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Aisha Alansari
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Joseph Poewhit 21 July 2013

Hits the nail right - WITHOUT RAIN

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Hommayra Amini 23 July 2012

Nice poem... I like it...

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Lynn Stillman 23 July 2012

This truly beautiful. How lucky you are to have had such a wonderful mentor. Lynn Stillman

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Lynn Stillman 23 July 2012

Very beautiful and touching. You are so lucky to have such an inspiring English teacher. Lynn Stillman

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Savita Tyagi 23 July 2012

Lovely tribute to a teacher. Keep writing.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 23 July 2012

I like the innocence and simplicity of this poem...some people always seem to leave deep imprints wherever they go...your English teacher is probably one of them...Good luck to both of you...

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Oasis Drama 22 July 2012

Great poem, ur teacher is ver lucky!

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Precious Okidika 21 July 2012

this is more of love than sadness, but both were properly mixed in right proportion. Good job

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Olayemi Ayo 21 July 2012

Your poem is lovely, well written.

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Leslie Philibert 21 July 2012

I like this, a poem written with care and style

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Nice poem... Well written..

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Ugoh Ifeanyi 21 July 2012

The poem is touchy and nice, and obeyed the rules of poetry.i love it

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Jo George 21 June 2012

I know you'll not be here or there..anymore, the important thing you're happy somewhere. Shows the innocence and goodness of the heart. Well penned poetess.

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Rowena Malik 16 June 2012

Lovely poem to read....

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