A year without you is like a year without rain,
since you came into my life..
everything became bright,
I used to live in the dark..
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This truly beautiful. How lucky you are to have had such a wonderful mentor. Lynn Stillman
Very beautiful and touching. You are so lucky to have such an inspiring English teacher. Lynn Stillman
I like the innocence and simplicity of this poem...some people always seem to leave deep imprints wherever they go...your English teacher is probably one of them...Good luck to both of you...
this is more of love than sadness, but both were properly mixed in right proportion. Good job
The poem is touchy and nice, and obeyed the rules of poetry.i love it
I know you'll not be here or there..anymore, the important thing you're happy somewhere. Shows the innocence and goodness of the heart. Well penned poetess.
Hits the nail right - WITHOUT RAIN