Sunday, November 18, 2007

A Year Ago Tonight Comments

Rating: 5.0

today the hope returned to my eyes
I couldn’t have been any more surprised
I thought that it was over for sure
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Jade Leven
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Jerry Hughes 21 November 2007

An excellent narrative poem Jade, it would read much better if condensed and less repetitive. Fondly, Jerry

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