DEATH is....
* to some a torment, spent in hells eternal night
to some a relief, the weary soul taking flight
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Wise thoughts, what I love the most is one about the hopes! Very good poem, thank you for share,10
Actually, I went through your poems because of your PM. Yet, don't be mistaken, I wouldn't make a comment if your work couldn't touch me. This is one of a kind poem. It reminds me of Mister Rober Frost. Not because of the style or words used, but because most of his works, as this one, inspires me the awe and the wish that I, someday, could be able to create such a masterpiece. The way you used words and gave them meanings, that was quite precious. Congrats =)
very good poem... shows much thought.... as for peace, it begins within and emanates outward, can never be won by war. like this one very much!