Monday, September 3, 2012

A Worn-Out Repertoire Comments

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Exhausted of hearing
the monologue in my head—
consuming every thought,
corroding every memory,
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Sandy Player 11 January 2013

it really is like a stuck-on radio isnt it? effective choice of vocab

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Robert Uy 16 September 2012

Just read your more recent poems. Hope they don't really speak of your heart's state in real life. I once watched a movie which had a line like...if someone hurt you, you turn him/her into literature. If this is true, you've just come up with some honest, heartfelt but great reads lately. I will definitely read more of your poems. Keep writing!

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Manleh Castillo 07 September 2012

...filling our thoughts with something that we like the most will help us forget something that we don't like to think about...

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Prasanna Kumari 03 September 2012

good poem there is so much feeling in those words...

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