Friday, January 8, 2010

A World Without You Comments

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A world without you
Would be a world with disquise
always hiding frm the questioning eyes
yet they never raise and tell the truth
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Hannah Bradford
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 09 January 2010

Beautiful and excellently composed.10++++ The poem is well-written with all th elements of a real poem- rhyme, meter, content, flow, and the final line as conclusion. There is unity of thought and simplicity or words that convey the meaning effectively. Keep writing in this style! 'Poems without rhyme may fly but they will never soar.' (DAvid Lewis Paget)

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