Saturday, August 1, 2015

A World Within A World Comments

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I can think sweetheart and I can feel,
Still in my eyes there are tears,
I have worries and I have fears,
I have a heart that’s not made of steel.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Leloudia Migdali 02 August 2015

What a beautiful poem! This world in the world sounds so promising!

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Kelly Kurt 01 August 2015

Another wonderfully written and highly enjoyable poem by you, Sir

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Khalid Saifullah 01 August 2015

It's a great poem of desire for peace and love.................................10

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Ayman Parray 01 August 2015

Dear Akhtar your poem 'A World Within A World' is the embodiment of the spirit of love and peace, and the dream every poet dreams. 'A valley that is green with lovely streams' reminds me of home. Thank you sir for soothing my soul.

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