A World War 3 Comments

Skillfully written. Our leaders just care about their own wallets... But, the Almighty's giving them enough rope to hang themselves. And we, who are suffering will be the ones to enjoy the victory... Great poem.

This poem contains a really strong message, I'd rather say essential...Once we turn back to God, everything's gonna be alright.If not, we all know where we'll be...Amazing write...

It is a marvelous poem written with great skill. Highly rich in imagery and style. I liked it very much. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Horizon Lost' please type the name of the poem in the search box and search the poem. Warmest regards Za Thinley Gytso

The sentiment of this poem is rooted in profound reality. So the subject matter is superior. I also like the structure if the poem and it's voice. My only fundamental criticism would be that the poem needs more specific examples of both how governments betray their own people and in doing so betray God's will.

Put together very well - some thoughts to think about expressed in a simple yet effective manner