Friday, May 23, 2014

A World That Once Was Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the wind blows
soil and dust
around a world that is no more
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Dave Alan Walker
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Unwritten Soul 06 February 2016

left me speechless of how the old world was beautiful to me now gone and replaced with fixed and unimaginary good things...still our present world is a nice place..just not as beautiful when i was a kid :) haha

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Smoky Hoss 08 June 2014

The Greek word for both wind and spirit is pnuema; I see a beautiful, meaningful metaphor for this in your powerful poem here; very well stated!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 June 2014

We should be able to do something while here to protect this world. Great warning delivered through the poem. Thank you.

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Ramesh Rai 27 May 2014

Wind and soul are alike. both can be realised only..Neither can be seen nor can b touched.

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Hans Vr 24 May 2014

Shall we destroy our world before we make it a wonderful place for all of us to be or shall we succeed in kindness and love and make them reign all over the world? I hope and tend to believe in the latter. But the former is truly possible and a scary thought. Good and thought provoking poem.

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Colleen Courtney 23 May 2014

Hmmm..an interesting poem. Could be interpreted in many ways. I picture as looking down from the great beyond after our final day has come and seeing the aftermath of our life and our world. Like the poem for it's sheer quality of making the reader think!

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Dave Alan Walker

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