A World So Broken Comments

This poem has moved me speechless. I too think the world is broken. The poet that wrote this has spoken. Great poem.#10

A broken World, It certainly is, So much we have changed, But unfortunately, violence is still, The language of the mentally ill. You're poem is full of truth and sadness for a style of life now gone and for the world we are now living in. Instead of the world getting better, we see violence and death on the rise. An excellent work, that highlights the absurdity of violence, remembering the victims of San Bernardino, rip. Thank you

As a prayer is whispered Will it calm their fears As they cry themselves to sleep Living in a world so broken