Thursday, November 19, 2009

A World Of Pretend Comments

Rating: 5.0

A moon lit night
Stars as far as the eye could see
Sweet evening coolness
Gentle thoughts of thee
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Patricia Gale
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C F 30 April 2019

Love from a distance, a pretend love or somehow it may even be your real love.... very well written.10+ I once read a poem: what is the ocean that separates us compared to the sky that binds?

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Fay Slimm 19 November 2009

This is pure romance and you are well able to sustain the depth of romantic moods - - - just so emotive to read Patricia - - ' make believe' can truly teach us reality if we listen and learn...... great read..... Fay 10/10

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Marilyn Lott 19 November 2009

Sweet and lofty... light and fun. I enjoyed the trip through the clouds, a nice way to start my day, Patricia. I gave you a '10! ' several times but for some reason it won't change. Perhaps later! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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