A World Of My Own Comments
The world is too harsh,
their words are too much,
your touch bears no warmth,
my body half in a tomb.
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This is very well written. Good rhyming. I like the content in one way as well in as much you dare to dream of a perfect world. I like it a bit less that you seem to give up to work to something that looks a bit better than what we have now. The world may be never perfect, but if we choose to perform every day 3 small kindnesses to strangers or people we know, it can transform our life. Each simple random kind act brings so much peace of mind and may in turn give rise to a million others. (speck of significance = poem in my collection related to this)
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10/26/2025 4:33:18 AM # 1.0.0
This is very well written. Good rhyming. I like the content in one way as well in as much you dare to dream of a perfect world. I like it a bit less that you seem to give up to work to something that looks a bit better than what we have now. The world may be never perfect, but if we choose to perform every day 3 small kindnesses to strangers or people we know, it can transform our life. Each simple random kind act brings so much peace of mind and may in turn give rise to a million others. (speck of significance = poem in my collection related to this)