Wednesday, December 24, 2008

A World Of My Own Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I write I go into
a world of my own.
My concentration is so strong
the rest of the world around me
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David Harris
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Patrick McFarland 31 December 2008

Here in the States we call this 'being in the groove' (or at least we used to) . Nice job Dodgy Dave.

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JoAnn McGrath 29 December 2008

you really DIAL YOURSELF IN....: O) .....I've lost that feeling don't ask me where it went....all the other noises of life are too over powering right now I guess....maybe after I start feeling better things will come back

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Alison Cassidy 26 December 2008

From where I'm standing, this sounds like single-pointed concentration - something we Yoga teachers teach with gusto. There's nothing quite like following your creative thread and seeing where it takes you. Sometimes, the result is a poem - like this reather splendid one. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sheel Patel 24 December 2008

nice verse...cms frm ur emotion...

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