A World Of Lies Comments

A concise and insightful bit of verse written with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

short but with a poem like this it doesn't need many words to convey your feelings. we all have the feeling at some point that we live in a cruel world filled with hate and lies and facades put on in the morning and removed in the cover of night but the facades never truely hide the person behind the mask. keep writing and don't give up on hope, because there are people out there don't need a mask to be someone they want you to think they are/ and one day you will find them. excellently written, great rhyme and unshaded feelings from the heart. keep hope my dear. and until then, let your pen be your release for your emotions. great job.10++ Jen

a very nice poem but all our not liars there are still good people on this earth