Friday, May 22, 2009

-a World Of Fantasy- Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the dark takes over the day,
And the world is all asleep,
The world of magic begins to leap.
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Cryselle D'souza
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Anjali Sinha 30 May 2009

wowwwwwwwwwww a fantasy land good write--

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Kesav Easwaran 30 May 2009

Real fantacy there, Cryselle...you have got a good imaginative mind...and poetic as well...good piece...i liked...10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 May 2009

The structure, the diction and the imagery are very well co-related in this poem. You have the art and craft, Cryselle. Keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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R.k Das 28 May 2009

it is an enchanting fantasy, , nicely picturised.

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