Monday, November 12, 2007

A World Less Ordinary Comments

Rating: 4.7

The meadow draws in deep
Taking me back with its inhale
I walk as if in sleep
And find me at the water’s edge
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Alison Dunn
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Sandra Fowler 22 May 2009

The true poet does indeed live in a world less ordinary than other human beings. Each stanza paints a rich poem picture. You are a fine imagist. As always, Sandra

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Wendy Webb 11 May 2009

Yes, I enjoyed this one, Alison, it's worth reading. Just one point, line 2 its does not need an apostrophe.

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Ron Flowers 28 May 2008

A sad, sweet poem exceptionly well written.

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dhainee pfafflin 12 November 2007

nice nice! <3 it! full of emotions

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