A World I Know Comments

This was a real journey. A journey that I am not sure I understood very well. The references threw me off a bit and I lost my way. I am not sure this would be true of all so I gave it a recommended 9. I was written very well for those who might understand. Nicely done. GW62

The world you know is the same world we all know...full of love, full of hate to have balance in this human world...Amazing piece! ! !

The poem is full of a million memos

Oh my that was good.... very long my friend. I think it may be time for you to begin the script for your first playwright for that is where I see you - standing & directing. Well written, very well done.