Tuesday, March 17, 2009

A World I Create Comments

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In the beginning was the word
This was with a poet
Let there be a world
Separated by waters
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Charles Kanyuga
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Bob Blackwell 04 December 2009

I like the world you created, I like the poem too. It is only by sharing our worlds wealth we can expect peace to return. Before time of ownership and title deed, man worked, shared the load, shared the crops and gave thanks to Sky God that gave them sun and rain. When the crops failed from drought they moved to fertile land. A great poem regards Bob

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Nangula Immanuel 04 April 2009

Wow! this is really one of those eye opening poems! its real good

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