I know the joy
That comes from watching
The sunrise
It sends hope
For a new day.
The inner peace we feel
When we walk through a meadow
Of wildflowers
It is like the world
Is paradise.
The beauty of the rainbow
That arches across the sky
After a big storm
It renews the spirit
Of a deserted heart.
The brightness of the orange moon
That turns the night
Into a colorful landscape
It gives a warm embrace
For a peaceful night.
The kiss
Of a cool breeze
On the face and strands of hair
Like a wonderful promise
That everything will be alright.
Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
I will give my vision here I am going to read verse by verse Stanza One: I know the joy That comes from watching The sunrise It sends hope For a new day. This stanza gives me a very very optimistic feel, as soonest as I read " sunrise" , that surplus feeling inside me, nearly at the brim of outbursting. Reminds me of Turner's impressionistic painting.
1) So many nieces and nephews have their birthday in this month, so today I have taken the opportunity to go online on PH. Dear mrs. Juan Austin, such a heavenly feeling I have got after having read your fascinating words, carefully selected and here we are to enjoy these wonderous lines in five stanzas Indeed having entered your poetic home, I get an entrhalling feel, WOW! What a pure delight to read and keep rereading. A 10++++
An excellent poem, brilliant lines conceived and written. Every reader will enjoy the colourful language here enormously. It was a true celebration to read this amazing world of wonders, Mrs. Juan Austin. Thank you so much for sharing these dazzling gems, one by one each a very beautiful pearl, absolutely a world full of wonders- God Blessses You and your beloved family.
Stanza Five The kiss From a cool breeze On the face and hair strands As a wonderful promise That everything will be fine. All five stanzas read and reread, beautifully chosen and formulated words and metaphors. I greatly enjoyed all five verses and such excellent expressions, this gem goes directly to my list of poems.
This is a superb piece.....it pleases me very much....thank u, dear poetess
This is simply an excellent piece.....thank u, dear poetess...
Comments from you, Sylvia Ma'am, Dr Dillip k Sahu, Robert Murray Smith and Mrs Bharati Naik triggered me to write more of my real feelings in words with my limited vocabulary.Sincerely hope you will keep on your boosting with your poetic suggestion. and criticisms.I express again my gratitude to all.
Every stanza reflects your great optimism.All poems of yours and all comments are highly encouraging for person like me..I am not at all a poem writer..I started writing my experience and feelings only recently, during the ongoing pandemic.Totally new to the system
A very excellent expression of nature's beauty with Powerful meaning reflecting your positivity.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Still Stanza One: As I said, very optimistic feelings for a brighter new day. The word Hope stands for “better than yesterday”, absolutely. A most fascinating start.