A World Full Of Fake Smiles! Comments

I loved the immediacy and the feeling of being right there at your side as you went through the city streets- - that is talent, my friend

That is called diplomacy. Smiling while you are hurting is indeed going with the flow. What a fake! A nice poem. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Splendid loved the imagery depicted delictely on city and people....that's what we too do all the time..the futility of modern, urban living...nice poem.

Whatever you explained here is true and vivid.... hat off to you.....

Whatever you explained here is true and vivid.... hat off to you.....

True, Abhishek, there are still too many fake smiles in the world. Truth is so precious. We all try to hide our feelings. For what? There is really nothing wrong with being sad. On the other hand a smile can often work wonders Let our sad moments be sad, and otherwise lets wear a genuine smile Good, thought provoking poem. Well done

This, oh God! I cannot hide...! I billed and smiled, a fake smile..to the people there inside.. and said good bye to the city side..! This was the taste of city side! ! you are, we all are the part of this day to day life full of fake smiles--no way out....

ur sensitivity to the little hypocricies to which a common man has got used to is simple and vivid............well done

beautiful poem..but you should be strong enough to face different cultures

Oh plzz all d ppl frm city rnt fake.

A poem with a fine touch of true mood- despair for fakeness. Nyc one

real message, with some great lines, like I talked to people far off, but could not recognize the one who lives beside.. it's the urbanization which sometimes makes us self obsessed, and we live our own life, forgetting things and people around, and forcing 'fake-smiles' all in all, a nice poem

Forsake all the fake smiles for the sake of humanity! ! ! ! ! nice one! ! !

wowww..loved it..! ! ..gr8 poem...

A vivid picture of city life is depicted here. We know that we are not doing right, still we do the same.Fake life! Thought is wonderful.

Very good poem Abhishek, congratulation. Please do write. I invite you to read my poem and comment.

natural smile has become scarce. good write

nice poem....thats real what our cities are..full of fake smiles...brilliant write..

current city life! ! absolutely agree with you! nice work! ! ! !

true description of city life..... nice one...