Wednesday, May 16, 2007

A World Apart Comments

Rating: 2.0

The world it seems,
To fall apart,
The hate inside,
Comes from the heart,
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Aaron Dacey
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Nicky Turner 29 May 2007

not to bad it makes you think but try going into more depth aza! ! !

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poetry lover 16 May 2007

Great write, has alot of depth to it

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