A World! ! ! Comments

Even in his simplicity there is complexity people make the world more complicated. Bravo! in few lines you could describe Clearly our Complicated World.

A sensitive and sensible observation of world and happenings around. I liked the idea of being affectionate towards nature and our planet earth. Best wishes

I like yr idea, it's indeed true. tks for sharing

The world has become complicated really........nicely penned.....

Yes, it´s true. That´s the purpose of literature, it helps us deal with all this mess around, the arts can help man understand themselves and the world.

Oh I feel this poem Luwi, I just hope that so many more get to read this wonderful poem....Our world still continues to spin in grief doesn't it sweetheart...excellent topic to write upon...and you have with pure heart...well expressed