Sunday, July 12, 2009

# # A Word's Power - Senryu Comments

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who ever you are
you should hold your tongue if not
disgrace you welcome
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Miriam Maia Padua 15 July 2009

very great word of wisdom... beware of what we say...for a tongue is sharper than a sword.. words can make us live but also, words can kill... i love this... lovelots, Maia

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Pandian Angelina 14 July 2009

Indra Mam' has given a wonderful suggestion, as always, you could group them together. The translation is great and true to the original too! Bravo & Best wishes for more! Angel

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Ency Bearis 13 July 2009

a great insight full of lesson...nice write....10

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Smiley Hooker 12 July 2009

Very sensible write! love it: -)

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Louis Rams 12 July 2009

MY AMERICAN INDIAN PROVERB: do not criicize you neighbor until you have walked a mile in their mocassins.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 July 2009

'a hurt from fire heals from within...hurt by word never ever heals' Excellently expressed the truth.10.

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Priyanka Bhowmick 12 July 2009

quite strong ones... the 2nd ones a bitter truth...10

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Indira Renganathan 12 July 2009

Very good job you're doing SL...I think you can group these senryus under the title 'Kural senryus'...for easy reading and reference....just a suggestion....best wishes to you for further work on this

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Catrina Heart 12 July 2009

Words are powerful than the sword.....lovely penning great thoughts shares in a well expressed lines...a dual linguistic piece...10+++

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