A Word From Mr. Brown (Children) Comments

Interesting account of a weird situation. The poem suggested but did not specify and left the readers with the why as the child must been thinking too.

'And don't call me Shirley.'; -) I used that line a few times myself in verbal repartees. You use a child perspective with it though. ... So one must write a child's poem as a child? Amicalement votre, Ronberge.

Lovely observation of the way children think. Cute.

... and why did Daddy call Mr Brown 'Yearite'? SeeJay, you're a tonic.

Very subtly done, and I love the Leslie Nielson 'Airplane' reference therein. It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance, C.J. Thanks for reading my work, as well. David

Nor do I. You have such a soft way of making a point. Rusty