Sunday, March 8, 2009

A Word Comments

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I don’t want to say a word
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The time that passed away.
A tear,
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aasma rehan
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Jazib Kamalvi 09 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Aasma. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Akhtar Jawad 02 April 2014

A word, That gave me joy. A love That I got and could not deny Those smiles That came to me and never fly. Very good lines, I appreciate and like this poem.

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Aasma Rehan 07 March 2014

Thanks everyone for encouraging me.

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loved it kiddo please don't stop here write more

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 March 2009

A cute poem.... Sweet and simple.....Posotive thought.......Keep writing, Aasma.

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Indira Renganathan 08 March 2009

You've very sweetly said it...good poem

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short and subtule i like it (excuse my spelling error lol)

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