Saturday, August 30, 2014

A Wondrous Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the predawn hazy hour
Languid blossoming of a flower
Like an infant from sleep awoken
Stretching in a languorous yawn
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Om Chawla
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Valerie Dohren 23 September 2014

Another lovely and imaginative poem Om, well done.

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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2014

I see the hand of a master poet. A highly imaginative, well articulated and carefully penned poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 09 September 2014

Song in motion, a visual delight Resonant, though, a soundless melody Low in decibel, yet hear could I. Enjoyed these lines the most! Any better can some one describe the blossoming of a flower and the delight it gives! A poem sweet as a flower!

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Chinedu Dike 03 September 2014

Lovely. You captured the scenario very well. A. Well articulated write-up. Kudos!

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