Wednesday, September 22, 2021

A Wonderful Human Being - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

He is a calm sea
A bird that sings forever
A man who never
Cares the flaws of his brothers
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 07 September 2025

An uncritical man is wonderful indeed! This poem has a marvelous flow a moving message!

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Timber Koleden 03 June 2025

This is a simple poem but filled with such expression! Thanks for sharing!

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Soran M. H 06 October 2021

A man who never Cares the flaws of his brothers

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Soran M. H 06 October 2021

The harmony between nature and human beings was not appreciated by many poets, but the talented poet Rose painted it in the most beautiful poetry image with influence on our feelings and our lives positively, well done for this wonderful work

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2021

My dear great Poetess, this poem is a brilliant Tanka, excellent metaphored poem, great poem of a great Poetess! A calm sea........free from storms, gorgeous poem! Such a finest feel rereading this

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 September 2021

Rereading this faviourite Tanka of the great Poetess, so amazingly rendered. WOW!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 29 September 2021

How pleasant to know such a person. Beautiful!

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Rebecca Navarre 27 September 2021

Beautifully, beautifully inspirational! .. With such heart moving thoughts and imagery! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Anjandev Roy 25 September 2021

Fine piece....like it....thanks for sharing...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 September 2021

Amazingly written in 31 syllables, profound Tanka so adorably created,5 Stars full for this exellent Tanka

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2021

What has been expressed in this poem is the truth!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 September 2021

A man with heart full of empathy! So wonderfully positive......Top marks

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 September 2021

How lovely Rose! A calm sea that sings with serenity for ever.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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