He is a calm sea
A bird that sings forever
A man who never
Cares the flaws of his brothers
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This is a simple poem but filled with such expression! Thanks for sharing!
The harmony between nature and human beings was not appreciated by many poets, but the talented poet Rose painted it in the most beautiful poetry image with influence on our feelings and our lives positively, well done for this wonderful work
My dear great Poetess, this poem is a brilliant Tanka, excellent metaphored poem, great poem of a great Poetess! A calm sea........free from storms, gorgeous poem! Such a finest feel rereading this
Rereading this faviourite Tanka of the great Poetess, so amazingly rendered. WOW!
Beautifully, beautifully inspirational! .. With such heart moving thoughts and imagery! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
Amazingly written in 31 syllables, profound Tanka so adorably created,5 Stars full for this exellent Tanka
A man with heart full of empathy! So wonderfully positive......Top marks
How lovely Rose! A calm sea that sings with serenity for ever.
An uncritical man is wonderful indeed! This poem has a marvelous flow a moving message!