He is a calm sea
A bird that sings forever
A man who never
Cares the flaws of his brothers
A man full of empathy.
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A man with heart full of empathy! So wonderfully positive......Top marks
Amazingly written in 31 syllables, profound Tanka so adorably created,5 Stars full for this exellent Tanka
An uncritical man is wonderful indeed! This poem has a marvelous flow a moving message!
This is a simple poem but filled with such expression! Thanks for sharing!
The harmony between nature and human beings was not appreciated by many poets, but the talented poet Rose painted it in the most beautiful poetry image with influence on our feelings and our lives positively, well done for this wonderful work
My dear great Poetess, this poem is a brilliant Tanka, excellent metaphored poem, great poem of a great Poetess! A calm sea........free from storms, gorgeous poem! Such a finest feel rereading this
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How lovely Rose! A calm sea that sings with serenity for ever.