Friday, April 17, 2009

A Wonder You Are Comments

Rating: 4.9

Your voice, a dove to my ears
Works magic to end my fears
Your touch, a lamb to my hand
Easing with calmness to expand
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Yelena M. 03 June 2010

Such a gentle and soft piece, Obinna.Thanks for sharing! With best wishes, Yelena.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 March 2010

‘…What angel you are, who spurs/My soul to a realm of stars.’ Simply kaleidoscopic play of colorful words with inbuilt beautness…passion shrouding and showering… Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+

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Obinna Eruchie 01 December 2009

naphright naphright (11/30/2009 11: 44: 00 PM) sweet to the taste

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Pregnant with passion my friend.

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Pia Andersson 10 October 2009

a sweet and touching poem.

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un believable again I have chosen the same poem

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 24 September 2009

it seems again i chose to read a touching poem which i did before...the title is attractive, for that i came back, ..enjoyed tis passionated poem

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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 August 2009

Oh what a poem! Amazing imageries! beautiful wording! 10+

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 August 2009

very poetic. Nice figurative language and imagery!

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Sonya Florentino 09 August 2009

Obinna, this one IS beautiful! my favorite lines.....'What angel you are, who spurs My soul to a realm of stars.'

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Nikunj Sharma 08 August 2009

Nice ans sweet poem...may the you stay with u, in u forever.pls read my poem called 'A coversation with you' and 'I'.

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Shoshana Green 07 July 2009

Gorgeous sweetness aliveness

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avery beautiful writing..i love and enjoyed your touching words..well done 10++++

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Howard Kern 04 June 2009

'A Wonder You Are'. I enjoyed this poem very much :) 'like a dove to my ears' and 'Works Magic to End My Fears' very impressive words giving thanks to the ONE that loved us enough to give HIS life for us! ! ! thank you for sharing.

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