Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Sunday, October 2, 2011

A Women Of I Comments

Rating: 4.7

She is the best i ever had,
she brings the smile when the lies saddness in me,
she wipes my tears vignurously,
as i admit she stormsmy heart,
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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
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Swetha Vanakayalapati 13 July 2012

this time despite beat and rhyme, thoughts and spirits...........truthfulness preoccupied the entire poem................. kudos to: your zeal comes from her love, your smile comes from her eyes, your life comes from her existence to you, oh! Yes! you Love Her

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 November 2011

man in general don't show their emotions, especially when it comes to telling your women what she means to you....maybe from your poem that thing will stop...great piece boy!

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(De Va) 09 November 2011

amazing....you have captured your love on parchment....nice write....blessings

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Soulistical The Poet 18 October 2011

She is lucky to have you. nice one

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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