Thursday, September 10, 2009

A Woman's Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

A woman who loves, is as warm as the sun,
She loves with her heart, which desires true love.
Her mind has knowledge that at times knows no fun,
She cries with a smile upon her face, wearing a satin scarf which is laced.
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Carol Tepana
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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 September 2009

Her mind has knowledge that at times knows no fun, She cries with a smile upon her face, wearing a satin scarf which is laced. Her eyes so endearing filled with pure love, who’s poised with such grace. There is a smile upon her face; the tears have left no trace.............................. true love still peeks up beyond wall yet not in askance misting within...............wonderful expression of grace of beauty splashing onshore yet serf touches the thirst of sands, yet passionate and utterly persuasive, ingeniously wrought by imagery and metaphors, brilliant in diction and style of expression,10++++, thanks for sharing

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