Wednesday, June 3, 2015

A Woman With Class Comments

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She looked at me
As though- -I was
A piece of vermin
But with a smile
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Allan James Saywell
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Briony Nicholls 04 June 2015

This poem has very good potential but unfortunately the avoidance of punctuation makes it rather incomprehensible to read.

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