Sunday, March 4, 2012

A Woman's Worth Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shimmer of the silk,
The clicking of the heels,
The hair curled,
The make-up pristine,
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Lizzie O'Neill
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Blossom Mist 12 March 2012

To the point! ! amazing work

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 March 2012

real write.short and to the point.keep inking.

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Martin O'Neill 04 March 2012

Lizzie, great stuff.... a sharp take on reality.

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Dave Walker 04 March 2012

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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:) nice descriptive words about... Women, they are the cream of the world, its only a matter of time that we man realise that The_African_Son

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