A wise man said a woman's scorn
is given to her when she's born.
She carries it, though under cover,
a secret weapon for a lover
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Yep... H.x, loved this one... ('you.mure me) .. with it..
Nice work Herbert! I love the first line...'A wise man said a woman's scorn is given to her when she's born.' Having three sisters and being the eldest, i have been through the conditioning process...LOL. LSP
I also enjoyed this poem Herbert. I think many women find ourselves using this 'weapon' without thinking.....a little trigger happy. It's wonderful how you bring to light topics that are just 'human' topics that we can all relate to. Great job. Sincerely, Mary
I liked it Herbert...I'm sure you've heard the saying: Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. This brings that to mind.
It's good to find substance behind words, moreover when presented in a tone that suites it so well. I enjoyed a lot, both the ideas, and the humor. thanks! Maty.
I am honoured to have three great poets like my work. Thanks guys Best wishes Herbert
Although i am not a great fan of rhyme i can understand a poet doing it if he is good at it and you are certainly good at it a great read Herbert Warm regards Allan
Pretty tight rhyming there and enjoyed every line. Good one! Amicalement votre Ronberge
Although you were certainly being brave in choosing this subject Herbert - - - - I have not stopped giggling yet at all the punches you masterfully pulled out of the bag to answer the topic put in your first line - - - - a terrific read...... and I as a female have to watch my step eh? Greetings from Fay.