Thursday, September 11, 2008

A Woman's Choice Comments

Rating: 3.3

What did she miss the most?
Let's guess!
Did she miss his touch or his voice?
His fingers lovingly fingering
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John Thorkild Ellison
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<font color =fusha>Amy 24 September 2008

i like is, short, simple and detailed- well done

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A clever and amusing poem! ! Getting deep into the heart and the brain of a woman. We need such poems, indeed. They have the same value as the inventions of scientists. I give it a 9+ for its freshness, and its surprising well crafted and penned conclusion. Thanks for sharing, dear John Thorkild Ellison. Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded

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