I am a particular man in a particular moment,
Next moment I'm changed, still a man but different,
Confined in a nation of a broken continent,
O earth! I imagine you as a singular piece of land.
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Another magnificent poem from the pen of a great Poet and thinker. A sterling piece of poetry that touches on so many issues with a great message of unity and love. The mingling of nature with beautiful thoughts and verses create more impact in the reader's mind.
Lovely poem on vision of love and Unity for mankind. It is further nice to know that women can supply the answers and take us closer to these cherished goals of mankind. Congratulations Akhtarji for this member poem place.
Congratulations sir, Verily love would have a different meaning if all continents were one
I am a particular man in a particular moment, Next moment I'm changed, still a man but different, Confined in a nation of a broken continent, O earth! I imagine you as a singular piece of land. - - - - -A heartfelt poem to see the world united.When dejected the poet seeks the loving fold of poetry to get an answer.Congratulations for the wonderful Poem of the Day.
Simple dreams of a common man or a woman for a better world can only be realised through innocent love and compassion. Thanks & Congrats, Akhtar sahab.
Emotionally strong poem about many shades of life. Your style of writing is beautiful and very nicely convey your points to the readers. Congratulations.
Watching the passing show! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Dear Akhtar Sahab, So wonderful to see this poem as the poem of the day. My Heartiest Congratulations! I have already reviewed this poem but feel so happy to read it again. It is truly beauty in stanzas expanded through love and life.
A beautiful poem sir! Many congratulations for this magnificent piece of work being chosen as Poem of the Day!
A 10 Full Score and myriad 10´s more, Akhtar Sir! I´ll read your amazing poem time and again
I cite your amazing last three lines: No Answer, dejected and frustrated slowly I move to my hut, A beautiful sweetheart standing on the doors that aren't shut, A woman replies all questions but she lives in a hard nut, Excellent, dear Akhtar Sir! CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray. Celebrations for you! God´s Blessings!
A beautiful sweetheart standing on the doors that aren't shut, A woman replies all questions but she lives in a hard nut, ....../// beautiful loving poem is selected as POD, congrats........////
A lovely poem Akhtar saab, congrats. A woman is like oceans of this world. We call them with different names but there is but one, for, they are all united as one. Continents/countries, the land, are all separate islands.
A lovely poem of the day. Congrats, sir Akhtar on your featured piece...10+++
CONGRATULATIONS! A lovely poem is chosen as the poem of the day. Already I have reviewed this poem poem earlier.
Success comes in cycles and black hole will be big banged. Everything wonder happens in nature and creation. There is no need to get frustration seeing sunset as new sunrise is waiting for us next day. With much eagerness and greatness rising moon talks to stars. A beautiful sweetheart is standing on the doors and narrating the beauty of each stanza perceived with great beauty of love ad humanity. An excellent poem is very well penned...10
A beautiful poem of love and life that perceives earth as a singular piece of land- undivided, of a single ocean, of nature holding pearls in her pretty hands and the joy of the sight of your sweet heart waiting at the door. A splendid poem, Akhtar Sahab.......10
A woman is a perfect representation of nature, whatever the question may be, she has an answer. A lovely gratitude to the women who heals all the wounds.
In the opening stanza alone, a reader would be smitten by the deep and powerful thoughts the great Poet had imparted. THe last stanza.depicts women's role in society with a note of their wonderdul attribute that despite of their status in society women are not suppressed to speak for love and truth. A beautifully crafted poem imbued with insight. Onto my Poem List. Congratulations , Sir for a well deserved accolade.