Woman of Substance.
She is not flesh and bones
Of insignificance.
She is intelligent substance,
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A woman is an intelligent substance. She is decency of character. She knows her way. She has compassion, love and faith. She has a nurturing heart.. She is the embodiment of tolerance. Really a woman is a woman of substance. Great write.Beautiful poem presented incisively. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.10
This is a truly expertly woven piece of artistic expression. It left me sensuous!
beauty of the art ==Did somebody say 'Breast'? Holy Bazoongas! ! ! nice poem
i didnt get what the title meant at first. but what i thought your poem ment by the title turned out to be completly diffrent and surprising. you done a good job with this poem.
beautiful and very nurturing somehow, thank you ruby. I sort of read this as a cynical critique but also very warm and idealistic somehow, a very well balanced poem.
Astoundingly clever. Enjoyed greatly. Caused a few chuckles. Thanks Ruby!
this made me smile... love a bit of raw humour.... enjoyable piece tyvm karen
Very interesting, Ruby... perceptive, reflective, dealt with with humor... Hmmm... A Booby Trap by Ruby Honeytip, a clever 'manipulation' or just 'coincidence'? ? ? ... whatever, a great poem... Terry
Yes... Well.. I suspose i should have expected that before i read it... Wonderful poem and of course wonderful outburst and observation at the end
lovely....until the coup de grace is delivered, unsuspectingly. innovative style and well portrayed ideas great!
Congratulations, Ruby! ! ! What great news. You're the only poet of the day I've ever known. One wonders will they dare to next fanfare your ode about your derriere?
oh, I loved this and laughed! It made me smile then couldn't hold it in any longer....! Really great and oh so funny! Excellent job here!
Never was worried about the respect, Ruby, but do think, very funny lady, that you should vow rather than swear.
The..wiggle when a walkin' an' a giggle when a talkin..' is from Chantilly Lace by The Big Bopper who died in the same plane as Buddy Holly and Ritchie Valens. Fun song.
You are all so supportive Great Balls of Fire could be my follow up poem to this actually hahaha
Breast or no breast, (real or not real) she sounds like a true friend. Is that great Balls of Fire' Well done ruby
A beautiful tribute to womanhood, well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing,