Thursday, September 18, 2014

A Woman In The Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am below an umbrella,
I am chasing my Cinderella,
Visibility tends to zero,
I am a teen-aged hero,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 25 January 2019

An interesting poem, loved reading it.

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Melvina Germain 03 November 2015

Soft, delightful, respectful and beautiful. I like it very much.....

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Heather Wilkins 20 September 2014

a lovely poem a young teen ager chasing his cinderella how sweet

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Savita Tyagi 20 September 2014

Lovely poem. The story of beauty and beast never ends with age. Thank you for giving respect to women while expressing your own natural instinct. Loved reading it. May you always be young at heart to keep writing so wonderfully.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 18 September 2014

Ha ha ha beautiful. Its a mood changing poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 September 2014

Do you have any rag? I see your bag, I want to conceal, The device of steal, My body is exposed, No eyes are closed. Beautiful lines showing a woman of this are never likes exposure.

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Valsa George 18 September 2014

So the teenager in you is still very active! An ardent admirer and a great connoisseur of beauty! ! Interesting write, Akhtarji!

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